Whys That?
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Playing.....
Sound like paranoid. lol.
Flow isnt natural, your struggling to spit your lyrics or either reading it straight off the paper.
With yoru dubs, add more emotion to it , the reason for dubs is to switch it up from the actual verse.
Your emotion sucks, its just plain ass.
Your content is generic bullshit, I could see you getting better if you are willing to listen to feedback, but I get the feeling you one a those kdis who considers himself allready dope, so wont be willing to listen to constructive crit.
Overall this isnt good, its sucks really.
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