I thought this was pretty good. It wasn't complex but I like it better that way it shows it wasn't forced. The flow was on point. I like self glorification when its done right and yours was done good to an extent. I see you have some talent some of it was tight and some of it wasn't. If you can be consistent then you got it.

Hit this om up please

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235182

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