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heh, sorry bout the comment. but you still dropped late >_<
jkz.
noose - bad syllable count, man, the flow got fucked up, because the rhyme scheme wasn't very complex. the topic use wasn't abstract, and was pretty simple, but you got a decent story out.. vcabulary was decen,t it wasn;t ike amazing, and you could easily tell you were forcing vocabulary... so decent piece... letcwhatsanegotst
sane - sane, your vocabulary wasn't as pretty as noose's but you didnt force it.. your flow was decent, just a little better than sinnisters, and you told a more original story... so for the factors of better flow and stroy ill need to give the win toooo
sane..
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Originally Posted by solo poet
soulstice tried out?!..dude we should have snagged that muthafucka!.
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