omg fuckin god! this is some ill ass true hip hop dude, I like what you did with this. Great storyline dude, I love it....the flow is fuckin straight out on lock. the hook is so catchy, nice job with that. To bad it wasn't more rappin, kinda looked forward to it lol. Oh well there's always time for them listen to the beat tracks on cd's. Have a deadly verse then play off the beat with dj shit in it. Word though tracks dope. p.s remember to get that verse done for hold you down...rtf here please man: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235210

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