I'll level this whore, and smash you straight to the floor
N ya name suits you
Cause you gota stanza of losses, yeah thats 4 or more*
Stupid bitch i dont know why im even battling you
Cause if this bitch ate parkerbrothers
.....................................he still wouldnt have a clue

vs.

damn man you really so suck You need to up your rhymes
and I aint talkin bout My old Verses when I Say
........................................ You got some played out stanza Lines

Flash put up a no-show verse so I won't comment on it too much, not that good, but a few lines which were okay I guess. Stanza, I feel like u just aren't elevating as I read ur verses every week. I think its great u come in here and show every week, but if you want to improve, follow this advice.

I think u should take a break. Don't battle for a couple weeks. In those couple of weeks, I just want you to read. Read literally hundreds of battles, but only ones from good heads, readin' bad heads work is just a waste of time. Basically from readin, you will not only see what ideas are played, but how they execute the concepts they use. If you see a line you really dig, analyze it a bit and see how they made it. Sometimes when elevating, you just need to stop for a minute and grow and that's what I think u should do.

That is tho, if you care to.. if you don't care much about elevating and are just doin' this to have fun, thats cool too.

Vote - Flash