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Old 09-21-06, 09:38 PM   #7
Ryan Hughes
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From: Jerzy
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a girl be giving us brain, straight acting unruly
we've taken turns so many times you'd think we're practicing UE's
Shit voters'll even tell you, high or sober you trash
Da way they state troopers a bitch...U'd think he pulled them over in da past

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if i was a puppy 4 sale in a window yo ass still coudlnt get me
if i really was a trooper i'd pull u over 4 illegal attempt of an Mc

V/n.tavarez....this was decent troop you had acouple of decent lines but not quotes...you need to work on ya punchs and concepts...but the line i quoted was pretty good...hott...you had a good verse more consistent punchs and personals where solid you get my vote
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