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Old 09-21-06, 10:05 PM   #6
Ryan Hughes
the real man of steel
 
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From: Jerzy
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But im destined to ruin you, punch n' text, til ya flesh ain't recoupable
Now watch his face get blown office head, without the sex in da cubicle

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This kids still new to the board, so watch me pop his cherry
N ill smash bruise n bloody your face worse then marry
This kids gotta big ego, So fuck you be dead
And this kid couldnt be a flyweight
.............Even if i droped it on his fucking head

V/Bruce....this was a weak one....multie you had that one line i like alot...shit was good but ya verse fell off to me...you had some played lines...work on your personals and punchs...the mobile line was decentish...bruce yours was decnt too but i felt it was more consistent those lines i quoted were ight...but you had a steady verse that gets my vote
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