First off....lemme help you out by letting you know that you gotta post two links to other threads that you have left feed on in your thread, so you should probably hurry up and do that before this gets closed
Word....first thing I noticed was there was a little too much empty space in the beginning. Zach comes in nice with the flow, but I'm really not feeling his monotonous delivery. I can tell that it's his style, so I know it wasn't something he was lacking at, just not a preference of mine.
Troublesome came in nice with the flow and delivery. You could easily gain a rep on this board. You got a unique sound to you....I wouldn't mind collabing sometime in the future.