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Old 09-22-06, 12:29 PM   #9
DaTrusHurtz
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Slowly remove'n you, while you dickride n' diss's, there's flaws in ya tank
Your not elite you fuck'n fag, the closet ya mind comes to art is draw'n a blank

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Nothing

Comin' in, I didn't know what to expect from Bruce cuz I ain't peeped him before, but I was kinda disappointed. Bruce, your stuff is just a bit too basic, no real wit to it. Like ur closer, he wouldn't be missed, just no creativity to that. The throw real in a window was ur best line, but it was forced cuz his name isn't Real Throw, lol, u had to change it to make it work. Sorry, just didn't think any of ur lines were quotable so try again next week with more wit.

Mr. Multie didn't come that great tho either. Line I quoted was a bit playedish but not that bad. Office line wasn't too bad either but I've seen a bunch of office lines before. Fix ur font tho man, just use a standard font, urs is newbish n' sometimes, perception is everything cuz if people perceive u as a newb, u won't get the benefit of the doubt.

Vote - Mr. Multie
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