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i thought this league was way fly.. until i saw this gay guy
i suspected you were ass.. AND THEN I SAW THE CAPITAL K.Y!!!
needless to say your flow is wrong.. you should break n buck
i weighed the pro's and Kons.. to find the Kons lightweight as fuck
you ain't original.. and i might say i checked your audio
you treat each track like an offensive down..
and change the play like an audible
vs.
Put the whip on 'em like a driveway, this is due the day before friday?..
Damn Nigga, This is gonna be a Long Drop, like a T.O Fly play..
Kon, u came pretty inconsistent in this match. I wanted to quote something so I quoted the TO fly play line. That concept was hot man, but u executed it poorly cuz u didn't diss him the way ya used it, you just said you were gonna drop a lotta lines, that doesn't insult him, but the concept was cool. The other TO line woulda been okay but the concept is played. Joker line wasn't too bad either, just played. Ur verse looked a bit rushed, try takin' ur time.
Te Ora, dunno if ur an alias or just from another site and I ain't heard of u before, but I liked what I saw, u came pretty nice. KY jelly shit was a dope nameplay. Football line was fresh n' the kons line was obvious n' he's prolly seen it before but not bad. Overall a pretty good first verse from u n' i'm lookin' forward to seein' more.
Vote - Te Ora
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