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Old 09-22-06, 06:12 PM   #8
Te Ora
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Off the scene for a minute so the comeback, I won't over do.
I owe some ass whoopin... and you bout to be Owin too (0-2).
cool wordplay
It's Over dood, Move Joke, you suck so bad you can't get Crew Votes.
This guy Sways so much that MTV made him their New Host.
i saw the dude areal use something like this on anotha.. i doubt you saw it, but this is played to me
The Championship is a short road, and damn ngga it's clear as day.
Fuck what you thinkin...wait that might give you Hearin Aides.
ehh
"You suck!" Hear Okay? I don't fight fair, so T.O.P. is jumpin doods.
Gonna be so much Foot Action, feels like the whole Staff's stompin you.
decent
Pump this fool, you a tiny lil ngga, you might wanna get weight.
Cause I'm lookin for Drama and it ain't for a Mixtape.
no real punch
If you forfiet this match bitch, be real, you better speak.
I thought Dog years were fast, Your Ranks gets older every Week...
hah. nice

vs.

Question number one, what the fuck's wrong wit you, son?
I can't quite put my finger on it....cuz i only have 10 of em
lol.. cool
Tunnel vision? Nah dude, when i clap at this wack kid
Ya point of view, simply speakin, would be the back of ya eyelids
i don't really like the 1 sylabbel rhyming you use.. but not bad
This aint even hard, lemme go head n describe this whore
A diamond n the rough<---THATS why he dull n don't shine no more
i've seen 'diamond in the rough' done better
Dog ya verses is bland, tryin so much yet u always get tore
So here's a helping hand
....................n 5 fingers around that thick neck of yours
decent
Just chill wit the forced concepts, man look how ya structure falls
That shit's more fuckin tilted, than a hardcore game of pinball
meh
Bitch u cry when u lose, so stop claimin u a good sport
Cuz i never heard such a tall tale...from someone so damn short
he's short then..? not bad

i've got this @ -

Off the scene for a minute so the comeback, I won't over do.
I owe some ass whoopin... and you bout to be Owin too (0-2)
If you forfiet this match bitch, be real, you better speak.
I thought Dog years were fast, Your Ranks gets older every Week...

vs.

Question number one, what the fuck's wrong wit you, son?
I can't quite put my finger on it....cuz i only have 10 of em
Tunnel vision? Nah dude, when i clap at this wack kid
Ya point of view, simply speakin, would be the back of ya eyelids
Bitch u cry when u lose, so stop claimin u a good sport
Cuz i never heard such a tall tale...from someone so damn short

v/ TB - on quotables. i felt he was more consistent.. i'd like to see him incorporate multi's into his punches, the 1 sylabell shit isn't really to my liking. so.rell wasn't bad by any means.. i just felt he had a few iffy lines, and the 'sway' ish was played to me.
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