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Old 09-22-06, 07:01 PM   #9
TonyTone
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needless to say your flow is wrong.. you should break n buck
i weighed the pro's and Kons.. to find the Kons lightweight as fuck
you ain't original.. and i might say i checked your audio
you treat each track like an offensive down..
and change the play like an audible
hip hop is on the decline.. with RV being the exception right?
all the REAL def reside here - how else are you the best on the mic!?

vs

Put the whip on 'em like a driveway, this is due the day before friday?..
Damn Nigga, This is gonna be a Long Drop, like a T.O Fly play..

TO came pretty consistent on this one. only line i didnt really like was the fruit concept cuz i've seen and used it before lol the offensive down line coulda been pulled off better but besides that i dont really see anything wrong w/ his verse.

kon had a lot of played concepts. truthfully, i've seen every one of his concepts before. even the line i quoted was played but because it was a personal, it made it hit a bit harder. but you used 2 TO nameplays in the same verse, thats a no no lol

anyway....
v/ te ora
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