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Old 09-24-06, 05:26 AM   #8
Implicit
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beginning real boring and plain

1st verse - like the flow. lyrics were cool and straight to the point. you did pretty good on this one. your voice went cool with the beat

chorus - ehh..not all that great

2nd verse - your voice sounds real boring. flow isn't too good. real strange. honestly i heard u alot better on other tracks

3rd verse - emotion is cool on this. likin the dubs on ya verse too. flow is on point and lyrically this is cool.

quality on this song was good though. maybe u coulda had some talkin in the beginning to kinda introduce the song. it was ok though. i give it a 6/10
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