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Old 03-02-03, 09:00 PM   #6
Lazyflow69
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i thought it was nice, i reaaally like it alot but u should have maybe more things rymin like make a verse out of certain words...its hard to explain but just try to ryme to the same sound more and reaaallly stretch out the verses... all and all it was tight
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