Yo son, was this your first time writin? or just your first time on Rb? Either way dunny, nice drop....you need to elevate your vocab, you used to many words twice...and your wordplay needs a little improvement...but just those two things, the rest you've pretty much got..

Stay spittin.....

P.e.a.c.e.






P.S. Raw...chill out son, if you're so much better than these cats, then help 'em out son...don't make 'em feel like shit...feel me...