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I don't lose
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IP:
will s unyu
bury ya face: NO - the flow was choppy a bit, just could follow it, it bored me a bit....just didnt like it really
prisoner: MAYBE - it was a good track i guess, i dont feel the beat that much....so yea its up to you
paranoid
bridge city:NO - no beef in this. you sound too seperated from the beat. like i dont even think your on it, the lyics have they own tune n it doesnt match well with the beat...the second guy is choppy at best....a positive is your starting to sound a lil more smooth then usual...but still no
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead
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