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Old 09-26-06, 02:03 AM   #10
Young Kidd (LM)
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I Like The Beat. Actually I Think It's Pretty hot.

1st verse - Flow's Great. I love the way you work the beat. it's Pretty Good. We gotta Collab I love your whole presence On The Track. pretty Ill Man. Nicec Lyrics and good opener.

Hook - I'm not really feeling it so much.

2nd verse - Voice is okay, I like your presence, but your flow is off like a bitch man. I noticed it first listen so I went back to try and pick it up more but it's still off.

3rd verse - Nice way of ending it off did good on emotion, and your delivery was good also you brought the flow up nice with dubs and everything. Great Ending. Hit me up.
COLLABO.

Quality was good, Idea was great. But the flow being off alot in the second verse kinda threw it off, and it wasnt having the emotion i think ya'll could of added to it. Maybe revamp it with a better flow, intro, and more agression/emotion.
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