the beat is WEIRD. not my favor, an not really well produced, its really scratchy. verse1 is too quite. flow is ok... couldnt tell you about the lyrics, i dont understand any of it, it needs upped volume wise... chorus is ok, its repeated too much, that sampled voice is annoying as hell. verse 2 is better volume wise, still could use upped a bit. volume is good an lyrics are good, i can understand this one = ). work on your mixing, an find beats that are better produced.

stay up.

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