I like how you got so much better too. Flow is there and the delivery is different because of your pronounceation. Your accent doesn't take over the lyrics anymore, you sound more confident on the mic so your emotion is better. The hook is catchy, nice delivery on it. There's somin missin on the hook, maybe like some adlibs to give it more depth. I don't usually do them but sometimes it helps a bit. anyway nice track dude keep it up 1

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