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Old 09-26-06, 11:52 PM   #7
Zach Warden
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From: Kokomo, IN
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i like them pianos in the intro. verse1 is nice lyrically. but its a lil too plain, needs some emotion. flow is on. delivery could use some dusting. chorus needs some effects, its sounds like the verse does, lyrics are nice. verse 2 is iite. sounds WAY too monotone for my personal flavor. lyrics arent bad tho. verse3 is ok, adlibs need worked with better, there not hittin on point and arent adjusted very well. overall ok track, good shit.

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