you better be good since u got my name and all

ight let me start out talkin on the beat
its ight nuthin that stands out and gets repetitive
but other than that it aint nuthin unstandable

ight 1st verse troublesome:

ur shit was dope...lyrics spoke truth which is #1 must have in rap
feelin ur vioce always u got a good vioce ta deliver wit
flow is completely on point..dont go off even wit one line
lyrics are ight aint bad could be upped but everything can be upped
there's no stopping...but the vocab aint nowhere near basic
good verse

hook: its ight nuthin real catchy
but i like it..better than i can do
i cant do hooks for jack shit
but it was just ight

zach's verse:

u got more emotion than other people i heard
but u can still up that shit cuz its not at the top
the flow is on point and damn i love how u start it
its so dope when the snare stops for that long
it makes people reconize ur flow soo much easier
lyrics were ight..bout same level as troublesome
other than that keep doin it kid..first i heard of ya

there i pretty much covered all the pro's & cons of ur shit
one more con that stood out tho is how it ended
sounds like ya'll didnt care and just faded it out too quick
u should let that shit SLOWLY fade then let it end
its less noticable that ya'll just wanted it ta end it

and zach...props for not makin my name a disgrace
keep droppin ya'll lookin good..i'd give this a 7/10..keep droppin

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