lol...i have a song on my mixtape wit da same beat.........

flow is there but ya lackin emotion....i mean i noe it's laidback but yo homie it sounds too robotic........for the hook that is

1st Verse - up ya quality...but ya accent is not that annoyin...ya flow is on your off a lil part rite before that daddy line.....
hook- lacks emotion needs more feeling....
overall - not bad but you could make it longer...........but yea work on what i mentioned above and it'll be strate.....

pz

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