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Old 09-27-06, 09:46 PM   #9
Ryan Hughes
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From: Jerzy
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your mocked everywhere.. but i’m saying that i’ll boot ya
TB is great @ RB.. Carnell Williams looks like a player of the future
but you aren’t a playa.. i can tell from the shit i’ve read in your verses
you got mad bitches.. hittin’ you over the head wit they purses
your wack as fuck.. i don’t need to glance your perspective
cause Brown eye warns all readers – ‘ass is suggested’
we all share music.. but i peeped your sig and the difference be
most woman need “myspace!”. needless to say this bitch has 3
you’re a sucker for love.. falling for golddiggers, it stings dude
if you have two sound clits – which one did you give the ring to?

Vs

Im takin but still chick huntin, wont b a prob nah, i doubt it
I'll either b fuckin ShanTe Ora bitch this dude used 2 go out wit
Dont kno much about em, jus heard some negative comments
I cant judge a book by it's cover
......................so i opened em n ripped out the contents
Damn kid, you gonna fall quick, tryin hard but outta luck still
I MEAN IF ALL THIS!!! dont make ya punches hit, then WTF WILL??!!

V/te ora.... this was a decent one both had some ight lines...tony the lines i quoted were good but you fell off on the others they were weak the mountian dew line no...te you had some good quotes that were funny your verse overall was more consistent wit better personals and punchs...good battle to both
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