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Old 09-28-06, 12:42 AM   #17
XM
Within Eternity's Wither
 
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From: VA/GA
IP:

You're an ugly square faced fuck, you'll never get muff dived
'N what difference does 1 year make to the previous twenty five!?
Yeah maybe you got with ya bf on tape, shits a weird plan
But One Night In Paris is waaaaaay more than enough for any man
A pop career? Damn Paris, the joke has gone on for too long
Cos Stars ARE Blind...'n so are the public if they notice your songs

vs.

ya mom and pops bounced, which leaves ya dismembered twice
ya godfather's a pedophile, well hey, there goes The Simple Life
abandoned bitch, 5th's season's comin, we had it in line, but then
it's gonna feel like deja vu when we leave you behind, AGAIN
it's okay though, i'ma be truthful and give you the facts, gladly
but how does it feel to be white trash with a rich black daddy?
if that doesn't reveal that pain then this is why the bitch is mad
she got a ass like opened pop and a chest that needs fix-a-flat
you went on a rampage, maybe drugs & sex were habits perhaps
i stopped intercourse for a year.. and you took advantage of that
so you did heroin, ran away, got charged and got off it with bail
and STILL tryna shine. Kids In America.. hell, the film fits you well
you claim that mishap for you bein skinny, ya never was hot hoe
and ya stomach is about one or two inches away from bein a pothole


Damn rush there's alotta qoutables here lol dope drops from both; both Kempo and Rush had decent takes on their verses but Rush had a damn good and humorous verse b/g check was well done also so personals were present

v:----:Rush; for more thorough n' consistant verse; props to both
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