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Old 09-28-06, 02:35 AM   #2
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intro actually kinda sounds funny. i guess ur a dangerous group

ok the first voice does NOT match the concept of the song. i jus think u shoulda came in harder with more aggression. that woulda been a lot better. lyrically first verse is decent. nothing really stood out at all. ur flow is real simple. at least u stay on the beat.

i guess this is the chorus. real boring.

second verse comes in a lot better. sounds much better. the flow is cool. cause it switches up more. more attitude with this guy. i like that. only thing is that it sounds like ur gasping for air.

chorus again is boring

i think this is the same guy as the first verse. adlibs are cool on this verse. emotion is alright. a little better than first verse. dont really get what youre saying in this verse.

chorus again same



overall this was a cool song. nothing that i honestly would listen to. the chorus really jus killed this song i think. but keep puttin out that music.
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