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^ does recycling = some sort of voting deduction? if so wouldn't it start at 0-0? neway who gives a fuck..
Past few weeks the kids I battled were no names, so this should be tight
I'm finally battling someone I recognise
you're that kid who I already beat in this league, right?
So much for elevation, you went from wack to semi-wack, CONGRADULATIONS!
I'll show you what pain is, and send the planet out of orbit when I kick Uranus
Girls grip my cock, I take em out to their movies so my dick aint soft
Ya Faimes also watching the chicks flic, calls all girls just flick him off
I got the jive & i'm mack, i'm a star and bitches striven for Jack
We all get our 15 minutes of fame
...but Faime's girl can only hope for 5 at the max!
recycling that nameplay was a bad move.. especially considering you referenced that battle.. but i guess it's rather minor.. that might've actually worked out cool if you'd put something like 'history repeating' or some shit in the set up but eh. the uranus wordplay could easily be played but i haven't seen it so i quoted it. i've seen pessimist wordplay done before. power rankings was a cool personal but a bit too bland for my liking. chick flick and your closer were dope.
vs.
You claim there's no competition with me, call yaself a fuckin pro.
....yet, you recycling lines you used on me 6 months ago?
Like you eating stiff food, you like taking it hard to the neck...
so I ain't talkin bout MCs spittin on you. .
....when I say they put they bars in ya neck!
Claiming you selling drugs to folks n peeps, you a fraud.
the last bag you gave out... was fulla groceries on ya job!
The whole 24 lines you dropped was the lamest and worst.
cause the only quotes you had... was my name in your verse!
the recycling expose was cool imo.. this was one of few times i think feeding could be tolerated. i think three sets based around it was a bit excessive though. the line that started 'don't talk about chicks' was a bad move.. you could've worded that differently but as is, i feel you feed with that. i actually preferred the second half of your verse > the first half. your last three sets were my favourites from your verse.. i've seen grocery type lines before but yours was a nice spin on it. you lacked consistency though.. shit like the 'mics with no sound' (mainly cause i don't see how "style" & "sound" rhyme) and 'slow thieves line' weren't on par with how you ended this.
v/ Jack. i've got y'all tied on quotables but i felt fame s. lacked in consistency. close battle though dudes.. keep at it.
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