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Old 09-29-06, 03:00 PM   #10
DaTrusHurtz
I Hurt.
 
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Past few weeks the kids I battled were no names, so this should be tight
I'm finally battling someone I recognise
you're that kid who I already beat in this league, right?
Please dyke, I believe it was a KO, ayo, you're wack bitch
Only time Quote was decent was on RB waaaaaay back bitch
Ya shamed & broke, I beat him once, now again i'm rippin this queer
AIGHT KEMP!
I gave him a few months, beat him again, what should I give him a year!?
I got the jive & i'm mack, i'm a star and bitches striven for Jack
We all get our 15 minutes of fame
...but Faime's girl can only hope for 5 at the max!

vs.

You claim there's no competition with me, call yaself a fuckin pro.
....yet, you recycling lines you used on me 6 months ago?
Don't talk on chicks, you can barely go a minute with that dick!
only way Jack lasting long on a bed. .
....is if slow thieves are stealing a mattress!
You can't be good.. I battled twice and won, rising gracefully.
while you battled 23 times... and still at the same rank as me!

Jack really didn't try here and the verse showed it.. some tight lines it, but also a lotta filler. Faime, hat mattress line was corny but lol, i thought it was kinda funny. You had a few other good lines, but u didn't come hard enough. Try makin' ur verses more mad and funny rather than just funny n' u'll hit harder.

Vote - Jack
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