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Multi- you had a hell of alot of multis in your verse but your punches didnt really hit or nor where they witty... i think the point of a multi battle is to just ahave some multis in your lines and still have the shit hit and not juts have your bars all multis without having real punches in them... thats what took away from yours
Tav. your shit was funny and had the multi's nothing really bad to say aout your verse
V/ Tav
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