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Old 09-30-06, 02:41 AM   #12
DaTrusHurtz
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chubby bastard. your suppose to make movies n do films that reach
this dude's grossing alot....of people when he goes to the beach
he's trying to be a ladies man in his films but he's ugly dude
even after 50 dates... the bitch wakes up to forget about you
fuck this foolish queer, my punches have you in constant fear
my blows will make your side show kinda like a description of your career
I woulda got personal. but after Mr. Deeds I forgot about this fool...
cuz I thought the Longest Yard was your distance between an Acting School!

vs.

ya life has been weak, ya whole careers over in due time jim
now a days his biggest achievements is getttin slimed on nickelodeon
we can tell you desprite, doing any moive...i'll punch sense in this bitch
the mask i'll leave ya face wit'll...be big enough to do a whole trillogy on it

Decent battle, Glocks def got this, much more consistent verse and stronger quotables. Gross line was a simple concept but funny and hit hard. Other shit was clever. Trey's verse wasn't bad, had some cool lines like the ones i quoted and the liar liar idea was good tho not used well. Not a bad effort, but not enough.

Vote - Roger Glocks
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