classic biggie beat right here....bad choice cuz people gon compare it to original which is hard to top...however u flowing to it original in ya own style....eh lyrically so far in first verse it lacks real depth...didn't really go deep wit it at all to connect the listener...hook is decent that "ooooooooo" in background was wack as hell tho...but he harmonnize koo its passable hook...if verses was deeper it would make hook seem better...ya mixing is def better tho...I see what I told u is helping....verse 2 an verse 3 same feed I gave for first verse applies...delivery was good tho...it had a nice calm intensity so A+ there, just shoulda took more time writing this an gave more detail to draw listener into story. Hook coulda been stronger if dude layered it more an sum panning...but good song...its a mixtape joint, it aint got no horrendous flaws jus some shit you could improve on.

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