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Old 09-30-06, 12:38 PM   #19
DaTrusHurtz
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Wish rules were clarified a bit more here. I'm gonna quote anything that sounds hot basically. Doesn't have to be a hard punch, but its preferred

Come w/ monster spits, clock n' pop ya bitch ya shit is gay, cuz facts is u not stop'n this
I've cop'd the win, cuz frankly with the spot ur in, u beat'n me is unheard of like lobster lips
Like hemorrhoids my ass is ill, my raps are real, clap n' personals safe to say da facts'll kill
U vs. me? ur way overmatched in skills, but im itch'n to get @ this pussy without da vagisil

vs.

this knife leave U soaking you'll be broken in two, provoking ya doom
from open tombs you'll go from mr. multi to mr. multiple wounds
wrap it up, you dont practice enough, you wack ass fuck
who uses multi's in they rhymes to mask the fact that they suck?
Im trashing this geek, you asking for beef? get back in ya seat
I'll smash ya teeth on on concrete so you can rap for the streets
Your a practical dumb spoof,Already mastered my gun use
And take ya dome off like it came with a retractable sun roof

It's hard to do quotables in a multie-battle, but this is what i came up with. N. Tav finished with some fired and good flow. Opener from N. Tav was my fave line of the battle and really exemplified I think what the point of this was. A really funny punchline that hit hard and had multies. Multie, u had too many multies. Too many takes away the effect of them, 2 or 3 in a line is really the max i think, you had more than that in some of ur lines. The ones I quoted were okay i guess, but the flow was a little shaky on them too. Fun read though for sure.

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