GG Haterz
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Myself:
Nothing special, but solid verse. I liked the imagery and the story itself. The innocence turning into something dirty is something I think we all face in a relationship. Like I said, nothing special or amazing I can really say, but I liked it and was worth the read.
Lamp:
I really wasn't feeling your approach to the topic until the end and it all made sense. I think had your followed that kind of story better, you could have won. More detail in each person's life, more a view from them, etc... Something that put me in their mind instead of just some person on the sideline.
Myself gets it for more detail, creativity, and overall just a better written verse.
v- Myself
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Originally Posted by Twisted Visions
50 nickle=less than 50 cent, go back to school you idiot
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^^I think this explains my view on gangster rap perfectly.
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