Voted For: Coherent.

vote- coherent
coherent was ehhh decent i guess...
you tried to hard to have too much word play...
dopeness lies in being concise but ..mediocre punches at best
third punch and first are a lil played
work on the flow
so 4/10


other guy..wow that sUCKED...not a hate vote
but try to be witty and not sound like 50 cent or some shit..im sorry to have to break it to you
flow was off!

butkeep battling and youll get better

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