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Old 10-04-06, 02:52 AM   #2
Dufflebag Boy
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ight leaving feed...

beat is ight...kinda ehhhh maybe a lil plain
but it still ight nuthin special

the hook is not bad at all
kinda catchy...still just ight

kk troublesome ur verse:
ur verse was ok not bad
flow is on point...delivery is pretty good
lyrics could be upped but they ight

zach's verse: just bout the same....delivery is decent
lyrics could be upped a lil more
flow is on point and it just ok
feelin ur emotion a bit more
over all it was decent

overall this was i'd say just an ight track
nuthin i'd probably really bump for a 2nd time
but it wasnt wack niether...it just seemed a lil ehhhh
but overall not bad but ya'll could do better

keep at it ya'll id give this a 6.5-7/10

pc
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