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Old 10-04-06, 03:48 AM   #3
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intro is cool.

beat is kinda annoying though

hook comes in first. i like the lyrics on this one. emotion is cool.


verse 1 - feelin this right here. flow is cool. you stay on the beat. lyrically nothing spectacular but it fits well enough. i like that last line though. true stuff right here

hook again..is cool.

verse 2 - voice is kinda strange for this track. it doesnt fit as much as the first voice. lyrics are better in this one. quality isnt too good. turn down the dubs maybe.



overall this was a cool track. maybe just up your quality and it would sound a lot better..oh dang the outro..i dont really like the voice cause it throws the track off. but the words are cool.
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