This isnt really my type of verse at all, you seem to have an audio-ready feel to your drops, which is cool I guess. Makes the reader find it easy to follow and find a 'flow' to, BUT content wise I cant say I was feeling this. Its no different to really ANY of the otherb 40+ drops you have in this forum already. Everythings on the same tip. Originality aside, I like how you toy with the rhyme-scheme and keep the multi-string running. That's a lot harder to do than you make it look, and you're one of a few I see doing that here. So props to you on that.

Stay up bruh.