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Old 10-04-06, 06:19 PM   #10
Zach Warden
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From: Kokomo, IN
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chorus blows... verse one has a nice start, starts losin it at the end... work on vocab... verse two is very monotone, too plain, lyrics are simple, honestly, this sucks... work on your vocab... verse 3 sounds like a 12 year old boy, too much bass, lyrics arent understandable, flow is presentable, adlibs are too low... not a real great verse... this has too much of a franchise boy sound for my liking... yall sound like some paul wall lovers...

stay up.

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Translation=

Im a Fupa Lovin Moose Knuckle munching Computer Geek..... Somebody Hug me
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