it was straight...a lil simple...try to improve on yo vocab...
put some multis in there...and try to put a lil wordplay to spice it up

i could feel this doe...get a betta ender too...

6/10

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I remember puttin quarters in the game and the Jukebox/
now i'm puttin quarters of them thangs in a shoe box/
Then i break em down no bags its just loose rocks/
no pump against me and the world i'm like 2pac
^^T-Rex