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Old 10-05-06, 04:57 PM   #9
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it's funny how things come out, n this time ya buds aint havin ya back dude
cuz the only way u'r six seed'n 's by pullin ANOTHER signature jack move
This was alright liked the set up... but punch didnt hit hard as it could have 6.5/10
ya neva been shinin bitch,
n if your as good as it get's.. i'll just relax cuz this kid is done
so i'll NEVER get a run for my money..
seeing jacks only worth bout a Nicholson
LMAO... liked this shit the structure of the punch was weird but the delievery and connection was great.. never seen a concpet like that i dont believe.. Dope 9.5/10

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So I dickride to kill kids? You must not be joking guy
Cuz if I ever trieda blow Tav
the headbutt you'd recieve would make ya choke and die
Eh this was alright... wording was okay but i just dont really like the punch 5.5/10
Me Tav and SPuL be calling up girls, you wish you could be 'em
Girls on the phone...
when it comes to Art they'll hang it up like a fucking museum
Word this was coo... i liked the punch shit was funny... 8.5/10

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14/20

This wasnt that bad of a battle... both had good closing punches... i just felt that Art had the best punch of the battle... props to both

v/Art
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