ahhh!!! that was nice man... seriously, good flow, decent wordplay, nice rhymes, and a concept not heard too often, much props for that... you sound very honest throught these rhymes...

"the thug style is getting old as mould, too many people claim to be bustin gats and smoking herb, when 90% of them are from the suburbs" this line was crazy, and true...
I'll be peeping your later posts man, no doubt...

Peace