i used a fake personal last week.. your still worse than me mate
but it's ironic.. cause i consider you, personally, fake
i fuck bitches homie, your just into scouting men
most RG's guard against sacks - your known to welcome them.
^This was nice... you should have put this much effort and wit into all your verse instead of the first and last punches. I mean i know you can come better.. shit you have before. but just try bein more consistant.. you prolly would have won with 1 mabye 2 more good punches

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I kept on reading.juss shook my head, if u thought you were leading
my punches will let you go first, then have your headstart...bleeding
bullets, shells, clips....gun talk is playeddd I know it should be dead
.. ^^ but all this sounds catchy ? dont worry it'll get stuck in ur head
hang youself. slit ur wrist. swallow pills...kill yourself I dont care
but if ur shooting for the top...that won't work cuz U wont be there
These punches was the best outa what you had... you also could have put in more focus cause i know you can do better..

V/ Roger Glocks

More consistant verse and overall better punches...

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