Flyweight
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IP:
Lampejo
Ironic huh.. you noshow twice sign out for a week and back again
Now you got two no-shows under your belt. n you still have yet to win
Only time you dropped lastime before you signed out was
when you got merked with a Capital B, n i aint takling alpabet cuz
Ill punch your face so hard you'll see double twos
so when im done with you, you'll be stuck seein 2-2
Ill rip out your eyes, n write with em, so you can see yourself lose
I'd say your wack n noone likes you, but that'd be no new news
vs.
Faime S. Quotes
Last week, you thought you was leaving fools just ruined.
claimed you was nice with the Wordz. .
....and instead, ended up losing to 'em!
Chicks? You don't have any, none you can put in your heart.
cause only time girls 'wanting Lamp'. .
....is when reading a book in the dark!
You never hit a G spot, you stick it in, think u traveled great..
turns out, you got a Long Way To Go like that song Cassie made
Overall this was a good battle,
Faime's verse was better organized as far as structure, wordplay, punches & metaphors,
What brought his verse down was the fact some lines in between lacked consistency.
I feel Lampejo brung it harder with the flow & personals. He was more consistent with his lines, but I think the only thing that hurts his verse was not enough creativity. Nonetheless, this was a good battle, keep doing what you do
Vote...Faime S. Quotes
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