ur vocals r pretty clear verse,delivery is cool,ur flow was steady and yeah i like ur voice there something inspireing about it,u had the right presence,its just ok for the track,i'm feeling ur lyrics too..hooks is a lil repeatitive to me but meh its iight...ah yeah the beat is cool...


dude on verse two had a cool steady verse...i was feeling his lyrics too!...great emotion on this

outro...yup nice idea..i like the way it ended...i wud listen to this again if only it was downloadable....decent job!

gd luck on ur mixtape project!

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