listening

intro...too low i didnt even get what u were saying!

ur vocals..umm,shud have turned it up a lil,u had a decent and steady flow,emotion was there,storyline is cool i liked it,i liked the hook more tho..yeah!..quality needs to be upped a lil more and dayuum cud have shortened the outro a lil it was taking a lil too long to end..it seemed like another verse was coming instead nothing!..and that is it from me...

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