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Old 10-06-06, 04:51 PM   #15
DaTrusHurtz
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Man Your ass Will get Sattled and branded like free range cattle
Face the Facts Your Ass is way to Wack To get cheated out of a battle

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I seen ya shit n truthfully y verses suck, no lie
Im Still tryna figure Out how u Decide Wut words to Capitalize
Had a thing for the professor, i know u wanted that freak
You dumb as shit thas why the teacher gave ST D's
yal fakas is just the same, ima put it simple n plain
NOK out kings? shit, no wonder i never liked that game
Really im not tryin, u weightless, i'll get ta pushin
N make u do a face-plant, like i threw ya ass in the bushes

Stanza, ur first bar was a nice personal, I liked that. That was about all I was really feelin' from ya though. Tony, ur opener hit him hard cuz it was true, lol, nice mockery. The STD line was good, but u shoulda used it based on diseases. Funny thing is, ur verse looked like it took 5 minutes, but it was actually a good verse, lol.

Vote - Tony Brown
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