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Old 10-06-06, 05:01 PM   #1
DaTrusHurtz
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This lame will get raped, and your face on ill be cummin
Cause this kids gay like Clay, hes Aken for some cock lovin
Only time you dropped lastime before you signed out was
when you got merked with a Capital B, n i aint takling alpabet cuz

vs.

Last week, you thought you was leaving fools just ruined.
claimed you was nice with the Wordz. .
....and instead, ended up losing to 'em!
Chicks? You don't have any, none you can put in your heart.
cause only time girls 'wanting Lamp'. .
....is when reading a book in the dark!

Close battle here. Lamp, you gotta work on the consistency. Clay Aken line was a dope concept. It coulda been used better, but it wasn't bad. The Capital B line was cool, the rest was too simple. I felt Faime had a similar problem, too simple. Wordz line was dope, but the rest was ehhh.. I quoted the Lamp line, but I used the exact same line a week or two ago. I dunno, close but I got Lamp slightly gettin' this.

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