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Old 10-06-06, 08:22 PM   #11
iamthatdude87
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intro is cool sample is coo n shit... beat is comin off more underground in the begining....ur verse is a lil choppy...delivery culd be upped a lil kinda monotone...lyrics is cool hook is off on the last 4 bars....hook coulda been mixed better....beat is kinda borin...second dude sounds like sumone i heard but cant remember sum parts in his verse was off he kinda sounds like non phixion i think hook needs to be mixed better...oh u guys switched up on the last verse but i wish u guys switched the flow rather then jus takin turns on rappin....overall gud drop yo ....
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