got me peeved, detective work in text battles is lame to do
the way you butcher other peoples quotes
.................David Lama would be ashamed of you
Mr. line quoting fag fake mod, its time I check you
Im FROM this site trus...you only here because YOURS dont respect you
I remember you was pet, too...so be easy and take a breather
and Com down bitch you probably cant beat his ass neither
Bitches get sensitive........... you know how that goes
So I'll take it back, Trus you aint my son
..............I could never father such a wack flow
They all left, Merc signed out, Brock was tired of typing rhymes
U proved even BUMS can win in this league....signed in at the right time
^tav i really liked this concept, but i didn't like the way u worded.

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I've herd ur a spic, an iraqi, i know this is upsetting ya dude
U've been mistaken for so many races, I won a parlay betting on you
Ur mad borin', you could fix that, and man it would seem
U have so little Witten u, ya tried signin' him to ya fantasy team
That was the interview we've seen, ur ideas were helpful to me
But why the FUCK would u propose an idea to kick u out of the league?
Ya got no friends, no job, ur an ugly sight in this rap
U woodwork... n' ya verse looks like it came right outta that
^i'm not quoting this cause i liked it, i just wanted to say that it had potential, but the punch was bland. plus i've seen shit similar to this. should'a worded it better for more effectiveness

EDIT: btw, that parlay line was pretty dope DTH. u should'a had more creative shit like that.

pretty straiight battle, no hate to either, but nuttin too impressive this week. tav's verse seemed as if it was rushed and some of the wordin on some of his punches were off. i mean, he had some pretty cool shit, but nuttin that had me thinkin "DAMN!" also, that oneduh line was meh. like, i dunno.. that shit didn't appeal to me at all. i honestly don't know what the point of it was tav. as for DTH, u had a good run as champ, but i honestly think this was a weaker verse on ur part. alot of ur shit was just statement'ish/ worded off/ seemed rushed as well. this could honestly go either way, but i feel that tav had the stronger quotables in his verse. so i gotta give it to him.

v/ N. Tavarez

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