N.Tavarez

You climbed to the top, but I dont give a damn what you've achieved
Get sent back down da mountain like U got 10 commandments for da league

Good opener, fresh.

got me peeved, detective work in text battles is lame to do
the way you butcher other peoples quotes
.................David Lama would be ashamed of you

Don't understand it.

Mr. line quoting fag fake mod, its time I check you
Im FROM this site trus...you only here because YOURS dont respect you

lol, cool.

I remember you was pet, too...so be easy and take a breather
and Com down bitch you probably cant beat his ass neither

Cool.

In every league you wack and slow, the facts'll show
1-2 was YOUR idea...yet you was one of the first cats to go

Decent personal.

Bitches get sensitive........... you know how that goes
So I'll take it back, Trus you aint my son
..............I could never father such a wack flow

Cool personal.

Maybe i should apologize to DaTrus... if disrespect is what I did
But I'd be telling Foleys big enough to match the one molesting kids

Good, I think...

This kid is fake cant equate, see him viciously ate
Could pimp a state...how U fuck with Dakota bitches and snakes

Cool.

So its no need to wonder if your lacking a hoe...
U dont drop ya Datelines, U da pedophile they catch on the show

lol, nice.

CALL ME A FLUKE, i battled Mim, Butler, Shakes...never went fronting
U champ a shell of the LBL, I held the belt when it fucking meant something

ok.

They all left, Merc signed out, Brock was tired of typing rhymes
U proved even BUMS can win in this league....signed in at the right time

ok...

Should try winning on OTHER sites...make a few friends w/ some chumps
Cuz you aint the One, Da.....And Halloween aint til the end of the month

I just used a Oneduh line in my no show verse, lol.

Overall: Pretty consistent verse with lots of personal attacks. Towards the end you started losing steam though, which could have hurt you. We'll soon find out.


DaTrusHurtz

Now Nelson...
I've herd ur a spic, an iraqi, i know this is upsetting ya dude
U've been mistaken for so many races, I won a parlay betting on you

Good personal punch.

U won't defeat me, n' my college classes have pleased me
Cuz I got the TA I've always wanted...
... the kind thats really easy

Good nameplay.

I been facin' the best weekly, n' at best ur a bitch
I've seen the area of dope... n' ur perimeter is less than a inch

Nice.

BITCH YOU DON'T HURT, N' UR A JUST SAD FAG WITH A VERSE
Oh sorry, that came out the wrong way... kinda like ur birth

Cool. Seems like it could have been worded better.

Ur mad borin', you could fix that, and man it would seem
U have so little Witten u, ya tried signin' him to ya fantasy team

Good wordplay.

Ur ugly, but I'm ownin' shit, so word to ya momma
I have Braggin Writes...
... you just have a fat bitch that looks like a Lama

lol, cool.

Ur a fake champ, but a real cheater, we all laugh at this queer
"Beating" Shake fueled such a controversy, it gave u gas for a year!

Good personal punch.

That was the interview we've seen, ur ideas were helpful to me
But why the FUCK would u propose an idea to kick u out of the league?

Cool personal.

Ya got no friends, no job, ur an ugly sight in this rap
U woodwork... n' ya verse looks like it came right outta that

Good wordplay.

Hate vote this, d/r that, but ya know what the worst is
These days I don't know why people even vote...
... for ANY of ur verses

ok.

The league is weaker, but fag ur not commanding when roaming
You represent the state of text... while standin' up in Wyoming

Cool.

I can diss you, ur a bitch dude, but I'm agreein' on truth, see
You were still the champ...
... by bein' dickrode and beatin' a newbie

Decent closer.

Overall: A tiny bit more consistent and didn't fall off in the end as much. Personals punch combinations were better and had more stand out wordplays.


Vote: DaTrusHurtz - Close battle. Felt he edged consistency slightly and delivered a few more punches along with his personals. Snatched wordplay up as well. Good battle.