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Old 10-07-06, 07:50 AM   #10
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Vtz dose have some nice beats mayne!

intro a lil too prolonged..but its iight!

ur vocals a lil low...

ur had a tight flow...pretty decent!

Lyrics..pretty nice!..u had some nice lines in there..i liked the mets and shit in there!...good 1

hooks..yep catchy...i wud learn it to repeat it...nice

you had the right emotion on this...YES!..


i'd give u a 9/10 on this one...too much 'fuck..fuck...fuck'..i understand the reason why u used so much but it was a lil excessive.Other than that,u did pretty well...lovely...


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